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欢人
宁馨儿/诗
初秋日灼灼，碧水映悠云。
风动流苏影，鱼牵潋滟纹。
彩丝娆小帽，素褂丽长裙。
频理额前发，嫣然只为君。
(馨注：第三联不甚合“平仄”律，所以根据北斗先生的建议,做了修改【from“曳”to“娆”】。在此表示感谢！）
The Merry Mate
by Petite (Ning Hsin-er)
The early autumn sun, it shines so fine,
and clouds in water drift slow, clear and light;
occasional breezes come, messing the shades,
as glist'ning fish in ripples leave streaks.
She in color’d-ribbon hat looks like a song,
her white gown a nice foil for her skirt long.
Arranging forehead hair now and again,
she wears a sweet smile, his favor to win.
Scansion:(in near or part rhyme)
The ear-/ly au-/tumn sun, /it shines /so fine, 10
and clouds/ in wa-/ter drift /slow, clear /and light; 10
oc-ca-/sion-al /breeze comes,/ mess-ing/ the shades, 10
as glis-/t'ning fish/ in rip-/ples leave/ ^ streaks. 10
she in col-/or’d-rib-/bon hat /looks like/ a song, 10
her white/ gown a nice/ foil for/ her skirt/ ^ long. 10
Ar-rang-/ing fore-/head
hair /now and
/a-gain,10
she wears/ a sweet /^ smile, /his
fa-/vor to win.10
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Version 2
The early autumn sun, it shines so bright,
and clouds in water drift slow, clear and light;
occasional breeze comes, to stir the shade,
as glist'ning fish in ripples trail'd n delayed.
she in color’d-ribbon hat looks like a song,
the white gown a nice foil for her skirt long.
Her tresses she arranges now and again,
a smile on her face sweet, his favor to gain.
Scansion:(in full rhyme)
The ear-/ly au-/tumn sun, /it shines /so bright, 10
and clouds/ in wa-/ter drift /slow, clear /and light; 10
oc-ca-/sion-al /breeze comes,/ to stir/ the shade, 10
as glis-/t'ning fish/ in rip-/ples trail'd/ n de-layed. 10
she in col-/or’d-rib-/bon hat /looks like/ a song, 10
the white/ gown a nice/ foil for/ her skirt/ ^ long. 10
Her tress-/es she /ar-rang-/es now and/ a-gain, 10
a smile/ on her /face sweet,/his fa-/vor to gain. 11
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馨注：铁冰的译文每行10个音节，韵式为ABAB ABAB，用词精当，且意象更美，译功之深厚，非我所能及.......试着把它回译成下面的“自由诗”，作为课后作业，也方便不读英语的博友参阅。
只为一人展笑靥
阳光明媚，点亮初秋的苍穹，
云朵盼顾着自己水中的倒影。
微风抚弄着流苏，碎影朦胧，
鱼划水面，柔波不断地涌生。
彩带小帽让她的衣着更加生动，
白色外套下她的长裙摇曳生风。
一次又一次地，她整理着秀发，
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青春就应该这样绽放 游戏测试：三国时期谁是你最好的兄弟！！ 你不得不信的星座秘密Image may be NSFW.Clik here to view.
